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Ophidian Waters - Milotic TF

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The stream gurgled quietly past the trail that Dsarvess and Peter slowly strolled along deep in the forest. Although it was only half a mile from the city, the wooded hills were wild and overgrown, the perfect place to spend a day away from the hustle and bustle of civilization; a desire that both friends had at the moment.

"Mmm, feels good to get out of that place once in a while" Peter chuckled, enjoying the sound of chirping Pidove and Swellow, much more pleasant than the constant sound of revving cars and city life.

"Yeah, it does" responded Dsarvess. "I like this trail in particular... I love the stream running along here. Hey! I know a shortcut over to the lake that it runs to. Want to head over there?" He grinned mischievously, pointing to a densely vegetated hill.

"Sure!" Peter laughed. "Just be careful, you might end up running into a Torterra or something!" He smirked as he gave chase after his friend, the two of them soon disappearing into the verdant growth.

"Watch out... The undergrowth gets pretty thick here." Shifting through the growth, Dsarvess pointed back down the other side of the hill. "See it down there? The trail follows the stream aaaaallll the way to the end of this ridge, but if you just head over it, you get to the lake right away!" Turning and smiling, he beckoned his friend. "Meet you at the bottom!"

"So it's a race you want, eh?" He grinned. "I'm game if you are!" He said as he began to run down the path his friend had pointed out to him. "Let's see who can make it down to the bottom first!"

As the two crashed through the undergrowth, they raised the attention of a creature dwelling in the lake. Carefully peering at the hill from its sunning spot across the lake, it cautiously considered the pair, wondering whether or not they were a threat, heading for some shrubbery to remain out of sight.

"Whoa... Wagh!" Dsarvess tumbled to the ground, rolling the rest of the way down the hill as Peter easily overtook him. Chuckling as he slowly picked himself up from the ground, he slowly brushed the dirt, twigs, and thorns off of himself. "Looks like you've won."

"Yeah, but it was only for fun. No hard feelings." He said as he extended a hand, helping Dsarvess back to his feet. "Hope you didn't get banged up too badly from that fall, last thing I want to do is have to spend a day in the waiting room." He joked.

The creature was observing them carefully, keeping itself hidden in the thick bushes, ruby eyes slowly scanning them.

"Hehe... I'm fine. It's not as bad as when I did that sort of thing on my bike, and I didn't have to go to the hospital for that. Hey, have I ever told you of that time I fell *up* a flight of stairs? It was like this..." Heading off into one of his stories, Dsarvess sat himself down on a log by the lakeside, slipping off his shoes and socks to cool his feet in the water. Pausing in his rambling tale, he gestured to a spot on the log next to him. "Care to join me, Pete?"

"Sure, would you like a drink?" He put his backpack in front of them, reaching into it to pull out a couple of bottles of cola, passing one to his friend. "And I thought the only way to fall up a set of stairs would be falling down an up escalator." He laughed. "But yeah, must have been painful."

Dsarvess joined him in his laughter, not noticing the creature slowly working its way through the bush toward them. "Yeah... I'm a bit of a klutz. Okay, I'm a huge klutz. Thankfully, I seem to have enough durability to come out of it okay most of the time." Taking a sip from the bottle, he gestured with it for a moment before clearing his throat and adding "Thanks for this, by the way."

"Not a problem, you're a friend after all." He smiled to him as the creature got closer, now practically behind them as it looked over the two humans. "I'd do anything for you, you know that."

The creature decided that she would wait a little while longer... And if they continued to be harmless, she would reveal herself. Not yet, though. Not quite yet.

Stretching his legs, Dsarvess rolled up his cuffs before sliding a little deeper in the water. "Ahh.... Feels nice. It's so much better than any swimming pool in the city, isn't it? I'd like to just wait here for a few..."

"Sure, I might join you as well if you don't mind." He said, glad he was wearing shorts as he kicked off his shoes and socks, leaving them beside his backpack as he took a few steps into the water, letting out a content sigh as he felt the cool, pure water running along his legs.

"Mmm...Oh yeah, that is pure heaven..." He smiled as he sat upon the river side, letting his legs freely dangle in the water.

The creature, finally unable to resist sating its curiosity, slithered out from its hiding spot, poking its pointed, peach-scaled head between the two, crying out curiously. "Miilooo?"

"What on Earth was that?" Peter pondered curiously as he span around a little, suddenly noticing the head of the large, serpentine creature before them. "GAH!" He yelped, falling back into the river.

The creature giggled happily as it saw him tumble backward, reaching forward and lifting him back out by his collar. It wrapped Dsarvess in its tail as he scrambled backwards, likewise startled by the sudden appearance of the immense sea-serpent. "Wh-what the heck is that?" He cried out in alarm. "It's huge!"

"There is no need for flattery, you do know that right?" The creature chuckled, looking at the two humans. "I'm really sorry if I startled the two of you, but I just wanted to know what your intentions were like, that's all." She told them as she placed Peter down in front of her.

"You... you can talk..." Dsarvess mumbled in surprise. Looking over it's iridescently scaled body, he felt himself quickly growing faint, dazed by the creature's beauty. "You... you're so beautiful.... Why did you want to know what our intentions were?" He slowly reached up a hand to stroke her long red hair.

"Because recently there have been humans passing through here that want to do away with this area, destroy the lakes and the forest, replacing it with buildings...and this place is my home, I've been here for as long as I can remember..." her head tilted down a little bit.

"What?" Dsarvess gasped as the Milotic wrapped her tail tighter around himself, oblivious to anything but her beautiful eyes and voice in his daze. "But this place... it's too beautiful... No one would ever let them do that... No one *should* ever let them do that!" Steadying his wavering body, he leaned closer to her face. "I... I love this place too. If there's anything I can do to help you save it..." He trailed off, feeling a little helpless in comparison to the magnificent creature.

"Mmm...well there might be a way to help out..." She purred. "A girl like me does get lonely in this area, not to mention you are both strong looking and handsome." She said as her head turned around to focus on Dsarvess. "But if you want to help me, I'll have to give you two more fitting forms..." She smiled as she leaned forward, giving Dsarvess a big kiss.

"Ohh... Oh!" Dsarvess blushed deeply as she kissed him, whimpering softly as he felt a chill pass through his body. To him, it felt as though every bone in his body had melted, everything going numb save for the feeling of the kiss. To his friend's growing alarm, whenever he opened his eyes slightly, Peter could see that they had taken on a distinctly more crimson hue.

"Errr, Dsarvess...are you feeling OK?" He said, seeing that not only had his eyes turned a deep crimson, the color had spread to his hair, except being a slightly lighter red. As the color leaked to it, his hair split down the middle, his skull starting to pop and reshape as a large, pointed fin slowly grew from his forehead.

Dsarvess groaned slightly as she finally released him from the kiss, "Ye... yeah... It feels... so... wonderful..."  He leaned closer toward the Milotic as his hair grew longer, and his eyebrows began to lengthen. Wrapping his arms around her, he held her close, entranced by the feelings washing over him

Peter could only watch on as his friend wrapped his arms around her serpentine form, leaning in against her as they shared another kiss, his eyebrows having grown into thin coiled tendrils. He could feel his neck start to lengthen and thicken next, two rows of three large dots lining both sides of it, forming the gills he would need to be able to swim underwater.

He slowly reached a hand down, running it along the breathing holes, mumbling to himself. "Feels... strange..." Looking back up at the Milotic he had become so infatuated with, he asked a question of her softly, afraid of offending her. "Are you doing this to me? What's happening?"

"I am doing this to you, my friend..." She purred, feeling his spine starting to grow and snap, his form starting to slowly grow larger inch by inch. "You said that you would do anything to help me protect this place...so I assumed that would mean you would also give up your humanity..."

As Peter looked on, stunned by the change that was overtaking his friend, Dsarvess kissed her tenderly once more, before responding. "Of course I would... Anything..." He reached down, slowly slicing his shirt with his gradually growing claws as it started to become uncomfortably tight. "Anything at all... Especially this."

His friend just kept looking on as his metamorphosis continued. "Just so you feel a bit more comfortable with this decision, one aspect of your human form will remain..." She purred, his arms growing a little longer as the developing claws grew out fully, stroking her form as he continued to grow, his legs starting to feel numb.

Dsarvess groaned, reaching down past the Milotic's coils to massage his legs, trying to force feeling back into them. As his eyes were drawn away from hers, the dazed, hypnotic feeling quickly passing, leaving only the delight of his altered form. He glanced upward, suddenly remembering Peter's presence as he quietly returned his gaze to the Milotic's. "What about him?"

"Don't worry, your friend is next." She chuckled as she saw Dsarvess rub his legs furiously. "There really isn't much point in that, I'm afraid." She told him as he felt his trousers tearing apart as his legs grew wider, growing free from their constraints as they began to then push together, the flesh starting to slowly meld as his spine began to grow down through it. It was a rather uncomfortable process to say the least.

Struggling to speak through the strain of the transformation, he groaned softly to her as his changing tail begins to stretch and grow, even where they were still legs. "Thank... you f-for doing this to MeEELOTIIIIIC!!" He wailed out in agony as his feet began to crack and shift, the bones within them melting as they slowly began to spread out into a magnificent fin.

"Think nothing of it..." She purred as his skin began to alter, taking on a slightly scaly appearance as the color turned a yellowish red. As his legs-now-tail grew out longer and longer, an abundance of red and blue scales started to form around them. "I'm sure you would have done the same for me if the situation was reversed."

"Of... Of course I would" he murred, holding her closer, carefully stretching his serpentine form, slowly coiling around her. He turned to his friend, his face slowly starting to grow out into a muzzle as he stared deep into Peter's eyes. "Come here.... It's wonderful."

He did so, noting his muzzle was a little bit broader than a standard Milotic's, almost reptilian in appearance, the teeth growing into sharpened fangs as his tongue grew longer and thicker to best fill it, new fangs also growing in. He felt his eyes part a little, shifting to each side of his muzzle as his changes ceased with his ears shrinking into his head, leaving small holes.

With a groan, Dsarvess's body began to grow and thicken, becoming a more serpentine form. He slid away from the female, allowing his friend to come closer to her as he slowly slithered into the river, letting the current flow over his scales, a delightful experience he had never before imagined. At the same time, the other Milotic wrapped her tail around Peter's legs, starting to slowly croon to him.

"Well how does it feel to be a Pokémon?" Peter asked his freshly changed friend, looking over his snake-like form as the female approached him. "It must feel pretty exhilarating, all that power, being able to use water and ice type moves and all."

Dsarvess shuddered and nodded, sweeping his entire body beneath the water as he spun around to face him. "Of course it does. It's so wonderful... Much better than being human." He grinned slightly, revealing sharp fangs as he flicked a spray of water over his friend with his tail. "Of course, not having legs was a little weird for a few moments... But it's really easy to get used to, as I'm sure you'll find out."

"I believe you there already." He smirked, watching his friend slowly slither around, moving to the side of his friend as the female Milotic stopped a few feet away from Peter.

"My dear, are you ready for this?" She asked him, making sure that this was indeed what he wanted.

"I'm pretty sure...I'm still with Dsarvess, not to mention we're also alongside a beauty such as you..."

She smiled and coiled around him, smiling sweetly. "I told you... There's no need for flattery." She leaned close to his mouth, her breath cool, almost icy, against his face. A moment later, she kissed him tenderly, and he felt a dizzying, bone-melting chill wash throughout him.

"I know...but I mean every word..." He felt a purr leave his mouth as he wrapped his arms around her coils, holding her close to him as they embraced, lips locked as the two of them shared a passionate kiss. Dsarvess couldn't help but smile a little as he saw his friend preparing for his change in high spirits.

He blushed slightly and looked aside, struggling between his slight jealousy over their kiss, or his delight and excitement at his friend's oncoming transformation. As Peter and the Milotic embraced, his skin started to feel a little dry and flaky, and a deep desire began to flow into him to immerse himself in the water, his skin slowly becoming a creamy peach shade, smooth and slightly scaly.

"How about we take this to the water?" He purred again. The female nodded, breaking the kiss momentarily as she coiled around him gently, guiding them both into the cool water. It felt really nice against his changing skin, and he let out a content sigh before resuming the kissing.

She wrapped her neck around his, squeezing and pulling as he felt the bones in them beginning to ache and stretch. Despite his lengthening neck, however, he felt his hair beginning to fall down onto his shoulders, his eyebrows beginning to tangle with hers as she giggled softly. "You're starting to look more and more handsome.... I assume you want to keep your arms as well?"

"Of course." He laughed. "How else will I be able to get around if I'm completely limbless?" He joked. He continued to stoke her sides, gazing gently into her crimson eyes, almost lost in her beauty as he nuzzled her gently. "I'm not sure if I'd be able to match your beauty though."

"Ohh... Just you wait...." She smiled happily, watching his face begin to slowly change, a fin beginning to part his hair, forcing it down the sides of his skull. "Your friend is already one of the most handsome Milotic I've ever seen... And I'm sure that you'll be at least as gorgeous."

"Aww..." He blushed a little bit, feeling his flowing hair waving gently behind him. "Now you're the one who is flattering me." He chuckled, giving her another kiss.

She wrapped around his legs tightly, squeezing his hard enough that it felt as though there was no more blood flowing through them. Softly whispering, she did her best to comfort him as they began to feel numb, loud cracking filling the air as he began to feel the bones in his legs split apart and merge together, forming an extension to his spine. "This will feel strange and a little uncomfortable... But stay with it. It will feel magnificent once you have your tail."

"Ggg...don't worry too much about me..." He tried to say with a brave face. "I'm not the kind of guy who feels pain too easily....GAHHH!" He suddenly yelped as he felt the bones in his legs cracking and altering, feeling his legs slowly fusing together. "But then again...I've never been in this kind of situation before..."

"Miiillooo..." She crooned, running her fin along his feet. "It won't last much longer. You'll be a Milotic like your friend soon." He felt an urge to spread his toes as she tickled his feet, and as he did so, they become longer, fusing and cracking to form a fin like hers; scales running down from it to cover his changing legs in red and blue.

"I know, I know..." He groaned a little more, feeling his feet finish stretching out, looking at the fan-like fin now adorning the base of his increasingly serpentine form. He tried to move them about a little bit, and found that he could fold and stretch them out as needed. "Of course the pain is going to be worth it though." He smiled as he looked at the translucent scales growing over his former legs.

"Of course it is!" She cried out in delight, nuzzling his chest as it began to expand, becoming more like his tail in its shape. Grabbing his shirt in her mouth, she tore it off, and began massaging his hands with her tail as they began to change ever so slightly, growing slightly more spindly and tipped with sharp claws.

"Mmm... Miiillllloooo...." He purred, looking at the dagger-like claws that adorned his fingers as he gently stroked the female's muzzle, gently crooning to her as the transformation neared its completion. He looked around at the remnants of his clothes for a moment before removing the rest of the torn shirt from his torso with his claws.

With a soft cracking noise, he felt something begin to change in his mouth. His teeth, now razor sharp, cut against his tongue as it began to grow outward slightly faster than his muzzle, stretching out to touch the original Milotic's waiting lips. "See?" She murmured as the peach-cream scales finished their spread over his upper body, "I told you you'd be handsome..."

"Millllooo..." He purred again, leaning once more into the kiss as he smiled, holding her as close as he could, trying to be careful with the claws as he looked into her eyes. "That you did my dear, that you did..."

"Your eyes have changed. Look at your reflection, dear!" As he glanced down, he saw a pair of deep crimson orbs, much like hers, gazing back. A moment later, she pulled him under the surface, giggling happily as Dsarvess approached the two. After a moment of surprise and residual panic from his fading human instinct, the fear of drowning melted away as he felt the water flowing through and around a trio of breathing holes on either side of his neck, pulling oxygen from the water.

"Hey, this is brilliant! Milloo!" He laughed, quickly adapting to his new gills, swimming down the river, his serpentine form allowing him to travel quickly whilst submerged. After a few moments he darted out of the river, crooning as his form hovered in the air for a brief few seconds, bangs trailing elegantly behind him.

Leaping out of the river behind him, Dsarvess snatched him out of the air and dove back under the surface. "It feels magnificent, doesn't it?" His serpentine face beaming broadly as he floated back up to the surface. "We ought to find some others... Change them too. This feels too amazing not to share..." He paused for a moment before beginning to croon to himself. "Miiillooo... Mi-lo-tiiiicc... Chiiiii...."

"Yeah, that sounds like a great idea." Peter grinned back to him. "The more of us there are, the harder it will be for the humans to try to destroy this area. This place is our own little paradise now." He purred before throwing his head back a little, crooning. "Loootic, Miloooo..."

The original looked on at them happily from a short distance away. It might get a little more crowded around here, but at least there'd be more than just her around. And once the people of the city were used to humans becoming Milotic... Well, maybe they'd replace the city instead! She smiled happily to herself at the thought, before swimming closer to the two, joining in their song. "I agree... We should do that soon. But first.... Milooooo... Loooooooiiiccc... Lioooo...♪"
Another collab with :icondsarvess: :)

We're slowly working through our list of favourite Pokémon, and we made our way to Milotic this time :P

We're most probably going to revisit Milotics in the future, do a little something with Syren

Enjoy, and if you liked this, please check out Dsarvess's version: [link]

Milotic is (C) Pokémon/Nintendo
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what's the main diffrence between yours and darvesses and Drellburda you spelled Milotic wrong